Unintentional Sequel Part 1

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Commentary:

So I guess my procrastination comic was open ended enough to spawn a sequel.

One thing I notice about my old work is that I always hate the dialog. I it always seems clunky and every time I read it I can see new ways for it to flow. Sometimes I re-write my dialog and then a few months later I read it and the new dialog seems clunky in all new ways. Is it that bad or am I just too critical of my own work? Maybe a bit of both.

By:Brock on 04-08-2006

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